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After Chaos (Read 186489 times)
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Re: After Chaos
Reply #220 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 12:09pm
 
"Yes and no. What is for what ever reason who ever published that book, edited a few entries? It could have been edited for any reason from grammar to spelling to fixing something that seemed out of place or impossible. It would be better and easier to see the events that happened and compare it to what has been written." He explains.
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Reply #221 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 12:56pm
 
"If a journal is to be presented as a historic document, there can be no edits. Notes and commentaries may be added; every letter, number and punctuation must match what the writer put down."
 
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Reply #222 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 2:28pm
 
"Even Anne Frank's diary was edited from its original text to make is palatable to the public. The things she had to do and endure were considered too gross to be put on public display. But again. With what is here in what you are supposed to write, why was it printed, by whom and what edits if any were made. Answer those three questions and then you can answer if any entries were edited to suit the reader or it is verbatim. We will not know any of this until we get to those events." Fernando tells her, then to everyone, "Since we are arguing about a stupid book and what it could have on it's pages, the tribe is waiting for us for their celebration they want to give us. We can stand here and bicker all night long about this damn book and disrespect these people or we can respect and thank them in their celebration because without them, we would be sleeping under a tree somewhere with empty bellies hoping some bear won't attack us in our sleep. No disrespect to Chihiro, but I aint eating a mouse."
 
Fernando gets up and starts to walk to where the village tribe has started a large ceremonial fire.
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Reply #223 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 3:22pm
 
(note: read Hondo and Val's history to understand. any questions PM me)
 
Hondo and Maria Valentine packed the last few items they needed into the camper.  
 
Valentine: I didn't think this day would ever come!
 
Hondo: I know! Finally we are our own bosses and my life long dream is coming true. I've always wanted to start a rescuing operation that could take on real missions and actually help folks.  
 
Valentine: And being able to hide it under the business keeps our family and customers safe from revenge.
 
Hondo: Yup, between this and having you by my side, I don't know if I could be happier. Hell, even if this never worked out as long as I have you with me I'll be the luckiest man alive.
 
Valentine: You're sweet. I'm lucky to have you. You don't know how much it means to me.
 
Hondo (with a sly smile): Well, you can always try to show me.
 
Valentine grinned and smacked him on the arm: Now, stop that! We hafta get rolling here soon or we'll not make it by night fall
 
Hondo sighed: you're right. Lets get moving
 
Hondo turned and smacked Valentine on the ass which made her jump and squeal. She was going to scold him untol they were interrupted.
 
Kathy: You need a few minutes alone to finish this or are we good?
 
Mack: You weren't going to leave without saying goodbye at least I hope.
 
Kathy was Hondo's sister and Mack her new Husband though Hondo had known him since he moved to North Dakota.
 
Valentine: It's alright. We'll finish this tonight.
 
Hondo: I hope that's a promise, sexy.
 
They all chuckled at Valentine turning red after that comment.
 
Hondo turned to Mack: No we wouldn't have left without sayin' adios. Once we get the place fixed up you two should come and see it.
 
Kathy: I won't have time off again for a while but maybe next year.
 
Mack: If there's beer I'll be there straight away.  
 
Kathy Smacked Mack on the shoulder.
 
Mack: Ouch! Why you hurting me, babe? See I told you she abuses me!
 
Hondo: and you don't deserve it?
 
Mack: that's not the point!
 
Kathy smacked him again and every chuckled again.
 
Hondo: well looks like you two need some time to finish somethin' now. Anyway we need to hit the road.
 
Kathy: Call us when you get there.
 
Valentine: we will.
 
They finished saying their good byes and headed to their vehicles. Hondo climbed into the camper truck and Valentine climbed into the Bronco Centurion with the off road trailer.
 
They hit the road and were off. They turned off of Ward County Rd 14 onto HWY 83 south. 70 MPH speed limit. The winds were light that day so they both set their cruise controls to 75 mph, turned up their own favorite country music stations and rolled on. about and hour 15 minutes into the trip, just as they enter the small town of Washburn, Hondo calls to Val on the CB.
 
Hondo: How's it looking back there?
 
Valentine: everything still good. I'm surprised how well that trailer pulls. forget it's there from time to time.
 
Hondo: good. We should be in Bismark in  a half hour or so at this rate. We'll stop for an early lunch at Cracker barrel before we hit I 94 west.
 
Valentine: Ok sounds good.
 
They roll through the town easily enough and head on down the road. about 10minutes later a flash of light disorients Hondo for a moment. He didn't even have time to wonder where it came from. The sight threw the windsheild made him slam on his breaks,shut off the truck and get out. Valentine squealed to a stop beside him and jumped out.
 
Valentine: What the hell was that light? and for that matter what happened here?
 
The road was messed up, there was a couple dead cars rotten with rust beside the road. there was no readable signs and the corn fields that had been there a moment ago were replaced with over grown prairie land. There had never been a lot of trees in North Dakota but now there were none to be seen.
 
Hondo: I don't know what happened but somethings not right here.  
 
Life lessons and Fernando's training kicked. They had been through weird shit before. Observe, listen, collect data and stay out of sigh until you figure out something reasonable. Unfortunately there was no out of sigh here. the hills were they could hide were another 30 minutes away on a good road. it would be another 45 minutes or longer on the current roads.  
 
Hondo turned to Valentine: Val, you pack that special purpose computer Fernando and I built?
 
Valentine: uh, yeah. I'll get it.
 
Hondo: thanks.
 
While Valentine dug out the computer Hondo went to the truck, strapped on his pistols and grabbed a couple rifles. When Valentine got back he gave her a rifle and told her to get her pistols on.
 
Valentine: Whats wrong.
 
Hondo: all of it. Until we figure out what the hell happened we need to be ready.
 
Valentine: and after we figure this out?
 
Hondo: we might need to get more ready.
 
Valentine just shook head head in understanding and trotted over to the jeep. Hondo flipped open the lid on the laptop and as it booted looked at his cell phone. No reception. He looked in at the GPS in the truck and it showed that they were where they should be, so what happened? Valentine trotted back over just as the computer finished it's booting.
 
Computer: User voice ID pleace
 
Hondo: Hondo Israel Sackett.
 
Computer: Pass phrase please.
 
Hondo: just open, you piece of crap!
 
Computer: Pass Phrase excepted.
 
Valentine gave Hondo a look of not being impressed. Hondo ignored her.
 
Hondo: Computer, run time scan program.
 
Computer: Running . . . .
 
The computer beeped a couple times and the screen lit up with fake gauges that showed different numbers. Only two Hondo cared about right now. One was time line. They were on the right timeline. the other was time itself. that number made Hondo frown.
 
Valentine: Whats wrong?
 
Hondo: You won't believe this but we are about 55 years in the future!
 
 


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« Last Edit: Aug 2nd, 2015, 6:35pm by Hondo I. Sackett »  

Well the cowboy, like the red man, you had to leave your land
You can't raise your stock and plant your crop in the gumbo and the sand
Greed disguised as progress has put us to the test
They won't be glad until we're gone from our home out in the west
It's sad to see those good old days replaced with greed and doubt
Soon we'll leave the country, the campfire has gone out
Bid 'em all adieu, you can't turn the world about
The cowboy left the country, the campfire has gone out
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Reply #224 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 6:01pm
 
Hikaru follows Fernando. "Even if no one else knows, one person can, one night at a time."
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Reply #225 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 6:02pm
 
"What then?" Jeanette asks.
 
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Reply #226 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 6:04pm
 
"If someone wants to know if the two are a match, I'll tell them. Otherwise, I'll remain silent."
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Reply #227 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 7:37pm
 
Fernando stops in his tracks and turns to them.
 
"How about we put away the book, and continue on without it. Standing here arguing about what is written is disrespect to these people as their guests. They want to celebrate, I want to give them thanks. So how about we be nice to these people because like I said before, without them we would be cold, hungry and sleeping under a tree hoping some bear don't attack us in our sleep. The hell with the spirits and the crows, that is the reality." He tells them, adding, "If I hear about that book one more time tonight, it's going into the ceremonial fire as part of its burning ceremony. I'm sure you two have heard of Burning Man. It will be Burning Book!"
 
He turns back to the village and heading that way, "Damn, it's been a while since I was at Burning Man."
 
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Reply #228 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 8:54pm
 
Hikaru just keeps walking. She has said all that needs to be said. If Fernando wants to stop walking so he can talk about shutting up, that's up to him.
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Reply #229 - Aug 2nd, 2015, 9:46pm
 
Fernando stops about 50 yards from the gathered group around a tall wooden figure of of an out-stretched man about 40 ft tall.
 
Tonane, the tribe's chief and the other ornate tribe elder (who is the medicine man) finds them. They look at them.
 
"Good, you are are here!" Tonane tells them, taking them through the crowd as the chief and medicine man leads the way to the center. The beating of the drums get louder the closer to the center they get...
 
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