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Re: After Chaos
Reply #1830 - Dec 26th, 2016, 1:29pm
 
Jeanette wants to talk to Moro first and Then Fernando; neither of them is there. "Penny, I need to talk to Valentine. I believe she's in her camper with Macey and Zoey. You can talk to Macey and Zoey while I talk to Valentine."
 
"Okay." Penny follows her mom to Hondo and Valentine's camper.
 
On the way, Jeanette looks at the crows. She is hoping one of them will say something; the crows maintain an awkward silence.
 
Jeanette knows on the camper door.
 
 
Meanwhile Chihiro notices the crows. "That's strange."
 
"What is?" Danielle asks.
 
"The crows." Chihiro looks at their despondent expressions. Chihiro cannot speak to the crows, only cats and frogs. "There are more of them . . . and they are quiet. Something's wrong."
 
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Reply #1831 - Dec 26th, 2016, 9:48pm
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 24th, 2016, 11:12pm:
Like any other society, there are guys dressed up as girls for what ever the reason, and they are flat. Is Ariel a guy in a dress?

That was one of four possible directions I considered for Ariel. Another of the four possible directions is Ariel is gender neutral. Keeping it open was the plan.
 
I introduced Ariel because Jeanette needs a reason to accept immortality. The previous reason is illegal so that had to be changed. Jeanette needs immortality because she decided to return to her time when the mission is over. It's too late to undo that.
 
If you don't like any of my reasons for Jeanette to accept immortality, then you come up with a reason.
 
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Reply #1832 - Dec 27th, 2016, 8:50pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 26th, 2016, 1:29pm:
Jeanette wants to talk to Moro first and Then Fernando; neither of them is there. "Penny, I need to talk to Valentine. I believe she's in her camper with Macey and Zoey. You can talk to Macey and Zoey while I talk to Valentine."

"Okay." Penny follows her mom to Hondo and Valentine's camper.

On the way, Jeanette looks at the crows. She is hoping one of them will say something; the crows maintain an awkward silence.

Jeanette knows on the camper door.


Meanwhile Chihiro notices the crows. "That's strange."

"What is?" Danielle asks.

"The crows." Chihiro looks at their despondent expressions. Chihiro cannot speak to the crows, only cats and frogs. "There are more of them . . . and they are quiet. Something's wrong."

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Sounds like a Crow funeral of sorts.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IBKycXlBzuM
 
And after they leave, they do not return for 2 or so years.
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Reply #1833 - Dec 27th, 2016, 9:04pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 26th, 2016, 12:27pm:
Quote from Fernando on Dec 24th, 2016, 11:12pm:
Like any other society, there are guys dressed up as girls for what ever the reason, and they are flat. Is Ariel a guy in a dress?

Would you prefer Ariel to be gender neutral? It has been established that Ariel is a mutant; what those mutations are has not been stated.

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Quote from Jeanette on Dec 26th, 2016, 9:48pm:
Quote from Fernando on Dec 24th, 2016, 11:12pm:
Like any other society, there are guys dressed up as girls for what ever the reason, and they are flat. Is Ariel a guy in a dress?

That was one of four possible directions I considered for Ariel. Another of the four possible directions is Ariel is gender neutral. Keeping it open was the plan.

I introduced Ariel because Jeanette needs a reason to accept immortality. The previous reason is illegal so that had to be changed. Jeanette needs immortality because she decided to return to her time when the mission is over. It's too late to undo that.

If you don't like any of my reasons for Jeanette to accept immortality, then you come up with a reason.

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I said to leave it and continue with the RPG. The administration of this forum would prefer to leave the victimization of underaged individuals to a minimum and preferable down to zero if possible. Other than forcing Jeanette to make a choice about immortality, it serves no purpose in the RPG. If anything, you as a writer are pointing how how sick, unethical and demoralized the spirits are to getting things done the way they way to happen. If Jeanette does not see that she is being used, then she is a fool who has accepted them as a god they are not. No one can grant immortality except for god and time itself. What they offer is a shadow existence among the living.
 
What you do as both a participant of this RPG and its GM, is on you. But remember there are guidelines for you to adhere too.
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Reply #1834 - Dec 27th, 2016, 9:12pm
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 20th, 2016, 9:05pm:
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"Go get your coat, we're going to do some shopping for some fresh juice and milk. After this I will be out of milk." Val tells Maribelle, "We'll meet up here in 5 minutes."

As Maribelle goes to get a coat, Val goes into their camper and gets the pull "Radio Flyer" cart, her coat and a small bag with a few gold and silver coins in it and her firearm she puts into her holster. She meets up with Maribelle outside.

"Let's go." Val tells her.

"What about Teri?" Maribelle asks.

"What about her?" Val asks.

"Isn't she coming with us?: Maribelle asks.

"She's learnin' how to cook. Tomorrow will be your day to cook. Now stop stalling for time, we need to go." Val tells her as she points to the direction she should go.

Maribelle starts to walk with Val behind her towing the pull cart to town.

 
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 26th, 2016, 1:29pm:
Jeanette wants to talk to Moro first and Then Fernando; neither of them is there. "Penny, I need to talk to Valentine. I believe she's in her camper with Macey and Zoey. You can talk to Macey and Zoey while I talk to Valentine."

"Okay." Penny follows her mom to Hondo and Valentine's camper.

On the way, Jeanette looks at the crows. She is hoping one of them will say something; the crows maintain an awkward silence.

Jeanette knows on the camper door.


Meanwhile Chihiro notices the crows. "That's strange."

"What is?" Danielle asks.

"The crows." Chihiro looks at their despondent expressions. Chihiro cannot speak to the crows, only cats and frogs. "There are more of them . . . and they are quiet. Something's wrong."

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Note: I know that we are not to use each other characters unless it is done very lightly. So I will use Jeanette very lightly here. If a change is needed, tell me what needs to be done and continue from there.
 
 
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Jeanette Sees Val and Maribelle getting ready to leave between the Electric camper and Hondo's Camper.
 
Jeanette calls to Val, "Excuse me, Val. Can I have a word with you?"
 
"Yeah." Val replies, then turns to Maribelle, "Wait for me by Karl's camper.
 
Maribelle beings to walk away, with Val stating, "What do you want to ask?"
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Reply #1835 - Dec 27th, 2016, 9:42pm
 
Chihiro recalls the times the crows were acting strange. Once the day Kuu died.
 
Quote from Jeanette on Apr 13th, 2015, 5:17pm:
As the two of them are having tea, Reki says, "Everyone feels depressed when the weather is like this or become obsessed with the idea something bad is going to happen."

"I'm not sure."

"You can keep the guest room for a while longer if you are not ready to move out yet."

"No, it's not that. Listen. Why is this town surrounded by walls?"

"Why is it? I don't know for sure. It's probably because this is a protected place."

"Protected? Protected from what?"

"From everything that's not good."

The first lightning strikes followed by a power failure.

Reki stands up. "Stay put. There's a flashlight somewhere in here."

Chihiro goes to the windows.

Even with the rain there's still some light coming through.

A crow lands by the windows. "Caw! Caw!" The crow quickly flies away, heading north.

Chihiro does not speak Avian but she detects a sense of urgency in crow's tone. Chihiro runs out of the lunchroom and to another window to see where the crow is going. She opens the window to get a better look.

As Chihiro is getting wet, the crow heads into the Western Woods.

In the Western Woods, near the wall, crows were squawking fervently.

Reki approaches with a flashlight. "Chihiro."

"In the Western Woods, the crows."

"They must have been surprised as well."

"It seemed like they were trying to tell me something."

Reki closes the window. "Why don't you go back in and dry yourself? You'll catch a cold. I'll go check on the kids. Stay in the lunchroom."


With no power, Nemu, Chihiro and Hikari had gathered in the lunchroom lit by a single candle.

Reki returns to the lunchroom. "Oh, boy. Some were crying. The others were excited. It was a big mess." She looks around. "Where are Kana and Kuu?"

"Kana went to check on the generator. Kuu is." Hikari starts to say.

"Not here." Nemu finishes. "And she's usually the first one to come down when things get like this."

"I thought she may have gone into town but."

"I hope she found some shelter from the rain." Reki says. "She must be miserable if she's on the road."

Chihiro stands up. "I'll go look for her."

"Look for her where?"

Chihiro walks out.

"What's with Chihiro?" Nemu asks.

"I have no idea." Reki answers. "She's been as gloomy as today's weather since morning."

"I kind of know how just Chihiro feels." Hikari says. "If you look at today's sky, it makes you feel restless."

"Yeah, it's nasty weather, all right but it's always like this when summer turns into winter." Nemu says. "It's only natural to feel a little worried when the seasons start to change."

"That's right. That must be it."

"I'll go out and look for Chihiro." Reki says. "Tell Kana to stay here when she gets back. Things could get way out of hand if everyone goes off on their own." Reki finds Chihiro outside under the archway. Reki has an umbrella but it's useless. The rain is coming down heavy.

"Maybe Kuu did not go into town." Chihiro says. "This morning she asked you to pack her a lunch, right? And she had a water bottle. To me it looked like she was getting ready to go."

"To go?" Reki asks. "To go where?"

"Probably the Western Woods."

"It can't be. She wouldn't have done that. Kuu knows how dangerous it is to go. There's no way!"

Kana heads to the clock tower when she overhears Reki and Chihiro outside under the archway. "Kuu's gone into the Western Woods?" She asks. "I really wasn't trying to eavesdrop but the generator's fuse blew so I trying to use the one in the clock tower and I heard you say."

"Well, we were just saying she might have because she's late to come back here." Reki answers.

"But what if she really did go there? Then that means."

"Kana! We don't know anything for sure."

"What's that? What do you mean?" Chihiro asks.

"Chihiro," Kana says, "I know you have never been to the Western Woods. So what makes you think she went there?"

"When the rain started the crows went crazy in the Western Woods as if they were trying to tell me something."

"That was because of the Rain." Reki says.

"But they were by the wall." Chihiro continues.

"You saw them, by the wall?" Reki puts her hands on Chihiro's shoulders. "Are you sure? You really saw them?"

"You're lying! I refuse to believe that happened! It just can't!" Kana runs inside.

"I did not want to believe it either," Reki says, "but it seems that Kuu might have really left all of us, the time when a mutant leaves this world on their Day of Flight."


Kana ran back under the archway and meets up with Reki and Chihiro. "I'm going."

Nemu and Hikari are still inside but by the door.

"You can't." Reki says. "It's too dangerous after sunset."

"All the more reason why we can't leave Kuu all by herself." Kana continues.

"A guiding hand is given to a mutant on their Day of Flight."

Kana walks up to Reki. "You may know things that we don't but until I see it, it's nothing but a myth."

"Kana, even if you go, there is nothing you can do."

"I know that. I just want to see her one more time, to see her face. Don't you even care that you are never going to say goodbye to her?"

Nemu steps under the archway. "Reki, is it true about Kuu?"

Hikari joins the rest of them. "If there is still time, I want to see her too."

"We all want to see her but think." Reki continues. "If you go into those woods without knowing where you are, you will never come out again."

"We need to have a point of reference." Chihiro says.

"What's that?"

Chihiro turns to Kana. "Kana, the bell in the clock tower."

"What?" Kana asks.

"Start the bell. The tower's generator works, right? You can keep the bell ringing, can't you?"

"That's right." Kana runs inside.

Reki turns to Chihiro. "Chihiro."

"Please, Reki," Chihiro says, "I know that I will regret it forever if I don't do anything right now."

"So bring three more rain coats," Nemu asks, "or four more?"

"All right, then." Reki answers. "We will all go together." The bell begins to ring. "But promise you will not go near the wall no matter what."


The five of them go into the woods. It had stopped raining by the time they arrive at the church ruins.

Some crows were in the trees, others on the ground, they bow their heads in silence.

Kana removes the hood of her raincoat and calls out for Kuu. "Kuu!"

Chihiro runs to the steps of the church where she finds Kuu's hat and some black feathers. She picks up Kuu's hat and starts crying. Kuu's last words replay in her mind:

And that's because you gave me some of those drops. Chihiro, thank you.

Another after a month had passed.
 
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Chihiro walks back to Old School. She goes to the hooks on the wall and was about to turn her nametag over then looked at the blank space where Kuu's nametag used to be. She hears a crow outside. She walks back out and sees a couple of crows, perched on a tree, looking at her. The crows nod their heads and fly away.

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Reply #1836 - Dec 27th, 2016, 10:42pm
 
As Maribele waits for Jeanette and Val to have their little talk, she noticed Jason coming out of his truck and approaches to the camp carrying a large cloth bag. She calls to him as he walks by Karl's camper.
 
"Excuse me mister. Where you heading to with that bag?" Maribelle calls to him.
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Jason stops in front of Maribelle and turns to face her, "I just want to know if we can establish a trade of some sort. I have a few food items here for a bowl or two of what they are cookin' in there. It sure smells nice, what ever they got in cookin the pot."
 
"What you got to trade?" Maribelle tries to nose in what deal that can be made.
 
"Just some biscuits, a giant mutant chicken egg, some smoked Giant Chicken Ham, and some wild edible greens. All this can be thrown into the pot if they like." Jason explains.
 
Maribelle think and decides that the items are not enough to make a power deal so she gives in, "You need to talk to Val about that. Right now she's with some other lady around the camper over there. Maybe you can talk to her when she comes out? We're supposed to go to the market and get some milk and juice for the kids." She then points between Hondo's and Fernando's campers.
 
"How long you think it is going to take?" Jason asks.
 
"I don't know, but the meal won't be ready for a while either. They're making some kind of meat stew." Maribelle explains.
 
"So you're waiting got her?" Jason asks.
 
"Yeah." Maribelle answers.
 
"Then I'll wait with ya." Jason says.
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Reply #1837 - Dec 28th, 2016, 10:57am
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 27th, 2016, 9:04pm:
The administration of this forum would prefer to leave the victimization of underaged individuals to a minimum and preferable down to zero if possible.

I asked do I need to make further edits.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 27th, 2016, 9:04pm:
Other than forcing Jeanette to make a choice about immortality, it serves no purpose in the RPG.

You did not want Jeanette to stay after the mission. You don't want Jeanette to accept immortality. How then does the fifty-six-year journal remain in existence? If Jeanette returns to 2010 without accepting immortality, what happens to the time line? What happens to the people born after the Happening?
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 27th, 2016, 9:04pm:
No one can grant immortality except for god and time itself.

Do we need to discuss immortality again? Quick refresh: The Texas Spirits and a group in Japan discovered how to duplicate the natural process in which Immortals like Hikaru became an Immortal.
 
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What they offer is a shadow existence among the living.

What do you mean by shadow existence?
 
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Reply #1838 - Dec 28th, 2016, 11:30am
 
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Quote from Fernando on Dec 27th, 2016, 9:12pm:
Jeanette Sees Val and Maribelle getting ready to leave between the Electric camper and Hondo's Camper.

Jeanette calls to Val, "Excuse me, [Valentine]. Can I have a word with you?"

"Yeah." Val replies, then turns to Maribelle, "Wait for me by Karl's camper.

Maribelle beings to walk away, with Val stating, "What do you want to ask?"

Penny steps into Hondo and Valentine's Camper.
 
Once Penny is no longer within hearing range, Jeanette explains to Valentine what's happening. "Wilbur Robinson, the man whom the Texas Spirits hired to take care of Penny for the past seven years, has been sexually abusing Penny. Moro and Fernando are gone. And though the abuse took place in this town, I don't know what the local law enforcement can do. Wilbur is in Charlton. The crows are suddenly quiet as if someone's cat died. At this moment, I don't know who to go to." Jeanette relays to Valentine what Penny said.
 
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Reply #1839 - Dec 28th, 2016, 4:32pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 28th, 2016, 11:30am:
Note: Only one thing needed to be edited.

Quote from Fernando on Dec 27th, 2016, 9:12pm:
Jeanette Sees Val and Maribelle getting ready to leave between the Electric camper and Hondo's Camper.

Jeanette calls to Val, "Excuse me, [Valentine]. Can I have a word with you?"

"Yeah." Val replies, then turns to Maribelle, "Wait for me by Karl's camper.

Maribelle beings to walk away, with Val stating, "What do you want to ask?"

 
Note: Done.
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 28th, 2016, 11:30am:
Penny steps into Hondo and Valentine's Camper.

Once Penny is no longer within hearing range, Jeanette explains to Valentine what's happening. "Wilbur Robinson, the man whom the Texas Spirits hired to take care of Penny for the past seven years, has been sexually abusing Penny. Moro and Fernando are gone. And though the abuse took place in this town, I don't know what the local law enforcement can do. Wilbur is in Charlton. The crows are suddenly quiet as if someone's cat died. At this moment, I don't know who to go to." Jeanette relays to Valentine what Penny said.

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"If this Wilbur character is in Charlton, there is nothing this town's law enforcement can do to arrest him. It is like the Wild West of old, put up wanted signs and hope for the best. If they capture him, Penny needs to be here to testify against him and that can take years. You willing to stay here for as long as it takes to get him? What about Gabrielle? I'll give you a hint, a true mother at this point would say - the hell with Gabrielle, Penny is more important. Knowing Fernando, if you tell him, Wilbur and possibly the Spirits will cease to exist from this realm of reality. As for these crows, I do not care about them. They gave us a job to do, we will do it. They want to reconsider and change the contract? Too late for that." Val explains. She adds, "It's on you as to what needs to be done. Tell Fernando and somebody is going to die because no one should abuse a child, especially sexually. Tell Moro, Don't know what she will do. If she gets the spirits to bring Wilbur here, that means you and penny staying here while he is tried and sentenced. You can not leave before then. Or you can leave him alone and deal with Penny like any other girl and teach her right from wrong, even if it means unteaching everything she has learned that is wrong."
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