Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:The procedure was done. But you stated long ago that when immortality kicks in is unknown.
This does not sound like anything I said. Are you talking about people like Hikaru who became an Immortal without immortality being given to them?
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:I'll further this with Immortality is a mutation. Something one is born with. If she went through a procedure to change her genetic outcome, then she is a Mutate, not a Mutant. There's a difference between the two and Mutating Humans is a crime as per the Anti-Eugenics laws put on the books world wide long ago. Or did you forget about this too?
You're bringing this up now? This has been apart of "After Chaos" since before it was brought to this forum.
Quote from Jeanette on Jan 26th, 2015, 8:59pm:Order of Fire operates in extreme secrecy. The Fire is an effective mutagen cocktail that they use to convert people into mutants. "Ascended" will inherit the Earth. Only the volunteers are chosen, though. The Ascension ritual involves thorough medical checks and organism cleansing, without which the patient would die. The Order does not like non-Fire mutants, because they are "contaminated".
The Texas Spirits, and the group in Japan they are related to, have been doing a procedure similar to this. Jeanette accepting immortality has been discussed since the second day in the story. Stopping this now completely changes a part of the story.
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:So far you haven't shown it.
And I'm beginning not to care about it either.
You got an abused girl, who is probably lying to protect Wilbur as most victims do and forcing Jeanette to take a certain action that the spirits have been trying to lead her to since the beginning of this RPG. If Jeanette can not see that she is being mislead by a little girl, then I don't know what to say. Actually I do but I wont say it.
It would be more accurate to say this explains what Penny has said and done and will say and do in the future.
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:You''re saying that they phucked up again, as grand and infallible you made them out to be?
In the past we have talked about the Texas Spirits correcting their mistakes. If they were infallible, we would not be talking about them correcting their mistakes.
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:Wasn't Wilbur a Spirit too who brought Penny to Jeanette?
Wilbur Robinson is a human whom the Texas Spirits hired.
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:Every time you state the spirits taking action outside of Charlton, it falls apart. This Fernando's fault too?
I don't see how that belongs in this discussion.
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:I need you to think because you keep writing yourself into a corner that ties up the RPG for 5 to 10 pages on argument and banter and not continuing with the story.
We have pages in this tread not related to the story because both you and I are arguing.
Quote from Fernando on Dec 21st, 2016, 12:14am:I'm not here to pick on you. But you should be looking as to how things look because people do contact us as admins of the forum saying some rather mean things about how this is heading and mostly from your side of the writing. Seriously, one of the nicest things I read was calling Jeanette a "Paper Doll." If you understand that reference, you will understand how bad the character is made to look. They all agree that your set of characters should have been killed because they are so fake in construct - copies of other stories having nothing to do with the RPG and makes the RPG into a non-realistic and nonsensical cartoon adventure that makes no sense in the very least. The spirits are God Mode Characters that is used too often for no reason at all. Fernando is a God Mode Character as well but his powers are used when needed, not out of convenience as in the case of the Spirits. This thread did not get 18,000 reads because of the three of us reading and posting to it. It is being read by a much larger global audience and many out there are not happy with a certain segment of it. Like we stated again and again, if the spirits are so powerful, why don't they get Gabrielle and bring her to Charlton - End of Story. And you do not want to know what they about about the journal. Really, you don't.
You do make one valid point, one I have noticed when I read the RPG from beginning to end last week. The use of transporting technology has only worked a few times in the story. The rest of the time the use of transporting technology has been too close to being
Star Trek. I need to figure out a way to change that. At the moment, I don't know how.
If we have readers, why don't they join us? I can't imagine an RPG being interesting without playing it. I welcome new players.
Jeanette Isabelle