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Re: After Chaos
Reply #1750 - Dec 10th, 2016, 12:47pm
 
RPG - In collaboration with Hondo and Jeanette:
 
Wilma calls for Roze and Karol. After Roze and Karl respond, Wilma instructs them on what needs to be done. "After the SUV is moved, I need the boys to unload the food from it. We bought milk, fresh bread, ingredients to make more bread, other grains, whole chickens and some dog food . . . enough to last them three days."
 
"Just three days?" Roze asks.
 
Wilma's expression speaks for its self. They were only able to get enough dog food for three days, not a whole week, the minimum they need. "On the way here I considered chicken with noodles for dinner. Come." Wilma leads Roze and Karol to the rear trailer and continues. "We need to check our freezer space. A butcher in town has a good price on a side of beef. If we're lucky, we can get it before someone else does."
 
After Hondo moves the SUV, Roze leaves the rear trailer, heading to the SUV, and calls for assistants.  
 
"Robin! Dakota! Madison! Francis! Jordan! We need you boys out here."
 
Five pretty boys come out, looking as if they're modeling casual clothing.
 
Roze opens the back of the SUV. "Milk, bread, noodles and chickens go to the kitchen. Everything else goes into the rear trailer."
 
"Yeah, we get it." Robin, a dark-haired boy complains. "Fresh food goes to the kitchen."
 
"Can we have hot cakes for breakfast tomorrow?" Dakota, the youngest boy asks.
 
"If you like." Roze answers.
 
"Yay!" Dakota cheers.
 
"We should all pitch in and help." Madison, the most feminine looking boy, has long blond hair and wears glasses.
 
"Too complicated for me." Robin continues.
 
"Robin, you should help some time." Madison complains.
 
"Yeah . . . I know. I just don't like doing stupid work like that." Robin replies.
 
"Wilma would be in tears if she heard you say that." Roze says.
 
"I don't mind working with machines at all." Robin is a hard worker; he prefers working with machines, not sewing or helping in the kitchen.
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Reply #1751 - Dec 10th, 2016, 2:53pm
 
I rechecked. A word is not missing. Instead, I added a word that should not be there. This is how it should have been:
 
There is no indication of this. If, for the sake of discussion, Valentine had gone looking Maribelle later, she would see the portable makeup station put up just as Ariel said it would be.
 
 
This is what you said:
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 9th, 2016, 10:14pm:
So far she's gotten on Val's nerves and Ruth's nerves, and made Ariel look like a bad guy - in case you have not noticed.

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Val was angry at Ariel for being a distraction and an excuse for Maribelle to use. But she is not falling for Maribelle's excuses.

 
 
What gives Fernando the right to launch someone else’s personal property into space? This is Ariel's responsibility. As long as she can manage both this kit and her suitcase, what is that to anyone else?
 
 
Let me clarify what I said earlier. I overplayed the "evidence card." Ariel mentioned Karl being in a bar fight to prove to Maribelle that she got this information from a series of books.
 
What Ariel brought with her is one volume of a journal the size of a complete encyclopedia. If one volume is destroyed, the remaining still exists.
 
 
The established existing nations are Japan, Israel, Arendelle [all real-world Nordic countries], Charlton [a small section of real-world Dallas/Fort Worth Metroplex], the Republic of Texas and Corona [island of the northern coast of Germany]. Of those nations, there are no Spirits living in Israel or Corona.
 
Don't forget that before the latest change in the time line, Jeanette and Fernando told Moro more medical supplies need to be made. The question is why aren't these medical supplies getting to the towns like the one the party is in?
 
 
Reminder: Charlton is an independent nation. It has been an independent nation before America was discovered. Charlton never was apart of Texas or the United States. There's no such place as Charlton, TX. The tiny, landlocked nation is called Charlton. It's NOT Charlton, TX.
 
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Reply #1752 - Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 2:53pm:
What gives Fernando the right to launch someone else’s personal property into space? This is Ariel's responsibility. As long as she can manage both this kit and her suitcase, what is that to anyone else?


Let me clarify what I said earlier. I overplayed the "evidence card." Ariel mentioned Karl being in a bar fight to prove to Maribelle that she got this information from a series of books.

What Ariel brought with her is one volume of a journal the size of a complete encyclopedia. If one volume is destroyed, the remaining still exists.

 
Nothing and nobody gives Fernando the right to do anything. But he will ct for the good of the group, and something that distracts or endangers the group will be dealt with in such a way as to eliminate it permanently.
 
I'm not complaining about what was over played or over stated. I'm just playing the characters as who they are. Val is usually a nice girl but get on her angry side, and she will get even hose who got her angry. She has a lot on her plate right now in taking care of the girls and setting up off to have somebody bounce responsibility for their own fun and games.
 
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 2:53pm:
The established existing nations are Japan, Israel, Arendelle [all real-world Nordic countries], Charlton [a small section of real-world Dallas/Fort Worth Metroplex], the Republic of Texas and Corona [island of the northern coast of Germany]. Of those nations, there are no Spirits living in Israel or Corona.

The danger of Ariel or anyone having the journal is what happened in Back to the Future II & III when Biff took the Sports Encyclopedia magazine from the future and nearly destroyed the McFly family and Doc Brown with the money and power he had acquired through gambling.

Don't forget that before the latest change in the time line, Jeanette and Fernando told Moro more medical supplies need to be made. The question is why aren't these medical supplies getting to the towns like the one the party is in?

 
The answer is simple for this one, where are the ships with the cargoes docking at and who is picking up the supplies and where are those supplies going? They are not leaving Texas, and the railroad lines do not extend from Texas to these towns.
 
These towns are doing their best with what little they got, which at times is nothing compared to Charlton. But they gotten this far and they will continue to be so without the spirits because they are supporting each other. It is not a perfect utopia but it is something that is better than nothing.
 
If only the Native Americans were the only ones to survive, their would be Mooks all over the place, and highways almost impassable and we would be within 50 miles of the native american camp and not gotten further with the spirit's help. We would have to camp in the wild, fish, bath, piss and shit in the river and hope something or someone(s) do not attack us in our sleep.
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Reply #1753 - Dec 10th, 2016, 6:31pm
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm:
Nothing and nobody gives Fernando the right to do anything. But he will ct for the good of the group, and something that distracts or endangers the group will be dealt with in such a way as to eliminate it permanently.

I was talking about the makeup station. Is this in reference to the makeup station or the copy of the journal that should never have been in Ariel's family? The makeup station does not endanger anyone. Fernando and Jeanette are co-leaders. Jeanette has a say in what happens with the makeup station and if Ariel stays. Jeanette would side with Valentine if Ariel says what will happen in the future.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm:
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 2:53pm:
The danger of Ariel or anyone having the journal is what happened in Back to the Future II & III when Biff took the Sports Encyclopedia magazine from the future and nearly destroyed the McFly family and Doc Brown with the money and power he had acquired through gambling.

I did not write this.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm:
The answer is simple for this one, where are the ships with the cargoes docking at and who is picking up the supplies and where are those supplies going? They are not leaving Texas, and the railroad lines do not extend from Texas to these towns.

In that case shouldn't Jeanette trade supplies to towns that do not have enough supplies and get more supplies when in towns connected to the Charlton Railroad?
 
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Reply #1754 - Dec 10th, 2016, 7:27pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 6:31pm:
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm:
Nothing and nobody gives Fernando the right to do anything. But he will ct for the good of the group, and something that distracts or endangers the group will be dealt with in such a way as to eliminate it permanently.

I was talking about the makeup station. Is this in reference to the makeup station or the copy of the journal that should never have been in Ariel's family? The makeup station does not endanger anyone. Fernando and Jeanette are co-leaders. Jeanette has a say in what happens with the makeup station and if Ariel stays. Jeanette would side with Valentine if Ariel says what will happen in the future.

It goes back to the journal. Anyone following it a problem to the rest of the group. Whether it is Jeanette, Moro, Fernando, Elsa, Hondo, Ariel or Jabba the Hutt following journal, it is a danger to the group. Anyone or anything written in that journal is a potential threat to the group.
 
Let me put an evil twist to it in terms of Back to the Future II & III...
 
For over 5000 years the hawks and the owls have been at war with the crows and in 2150 finds the ancient archives of Jeanette Miller. After years of interpreting the language they break it code and find out that in 2066 the group was sent to rescue Gabrielle. The events they managed to put into play effects society in the future to they carefully plot as to where their best strike would be with minimal damage to the future. They find it in a settlement called Elmsfort, formally a fort in the panhandle of Colorado.
 
It is Elmford where Fernando and Hondo killed off the last of the slavers before entering Texas, and where Jeanette rescues another child. This happens indoors in separate facilities. They plan on the following:
 
Eliminating the crows in the area.
Capturing and if needed killing Fernando, Hondo, and Jeanette.
The rescue party at the camp are killed, including Chihiro, Elsa, Danielle and the others. The campers they lived in during this trip are burned.
Since they know about the items that they have, certain things are salvages as trophies, like Fernando's Walking Stick and their computing devices.
 
Jeanette dares ask the question, "Why?"
 
After days of getting no answer, she gets the answer of "You were on the wrong side." before they execute her.
 
After the execution, they go into Charlton and eliminate the crows there and work their way across the planet killing those in other cities. Fernando was right on one thing, the crows in their inept superiority complex over looked the need to defend themselves from other groups. Thus in the end of Jeanette's first and only journal somebody puts in, "She is dead. The End."
 
And that is putting it nicely.
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 6:31pm:
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm:
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 2:53pm:
The danger of Ariel or anyone having the journal is what happened in Back to the Future II & III when Biff took the Sports Encyclopedia magazine from the future and nearly destroyed the McFly family and Doc Brown with the money and power he had acquired through gambling.

I did not write this.

No, you did not . something must have glitched in the cut and paste.
 
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 10th, 2016, 6:31pm:
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 4:11pm:
The answer is simple for this one, where are the ships with the cargoes docking at and who is picking up the supplies and where are those supplies going? They are not leaving Texas, and the railroad lines do not extend from Texas to these towns.

In that case shouldn't Jeanette trade supplies to towns that do not have enough supplies and get more supplies when in towns connected to the Charlton Railroad?

Jeanette Isabelle

 
Jeanette should talk with the Spirits and those capable of making such equipment and make a trade deal with them while the railroads are being repairs. They still have blimps and zeppelins though that is slower than rail but at least it will get there. A train can get there in lets say 4 days, regardless of weather except for extreme weather. An airship can take a week or more and only on good weather days. So there is hope for the trade. Jeanette needs to be in charge of this like Fernando has been in charge of the rescuing of others. First question she should ask is, "Do you have a blimp/zeppelin/Airship?" and then deal accordingly from there.
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Reply #1755 - Dec 10th, 2016, 9:29pm
 
Jeanette cannot stop writing the journal because that would alter the time further than what it already has. Jeanette can't put in a note in the journal to Ariel saying, "Don't read further." That too would alter the time line further than what it already has. It was after the last change in the time line that the Texas Spirits realized what happened and that they should not make further fixes using time travel. The Texas Spirits can confiscate the journals stating that, however it happened, they should not have ended up in her grandfather's possession. That would be the most they can do without altering the time line further.
 
Given everything that has happened in less than a week, the Texas Spirits are avoiding anything Fernando could potentially complain about. Anything they sell outside of Texas has to be done through companies they have owned since before the Happening. One of them is through Mountain Creek, a chain of camping supply stores. The only stores they built outside of Texas are along their railroad, which has been fixed for quite some time.
 
The question is, why doesn't someone not associated with the Texas Spirits buy supplies from these stores and sell them in towns like the one the party is in now?
 
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Reply #1756 - Dec 10th, 2016, 10:07pm
 
The answer to that is 2 fold.
 
One: the distance.
 
Two: people do not trust spirits in general as they have been burnt by others so much. It is like in today's world, a black mugs a little old lady and hurts her. When she gets home she is scared to go out and scared of blacks. Her family are angry against blacks because they harmed their grandmother. So there is a prejudice that linger for a long time. And they teach their children not to trust blacks and it becomes a self fulfilling prophesy.
 
 
Now, the spirits should be doing what Fernando has said all along - study what is out there, find out who they can work with and improve the conditions once trust is established. Except for guard duty here and there and protecting Jeanette, the spirits have not done a damn thing. Jeanette should at least be an envoy for them and find out that is going on and how the spirits can help. Bur she has not done that either. For her doing that with the hospital would be a good first step.
 
When Fernando returns, Jeanette should barrow his civil war surgical kit and ask from it what would the docs need. From that since the kit is 90% metal they spirits can make it. The wood parts and case can be made in Japan or Israel and then they get a case or two with 4 of them in it by "air mail."
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Reply #1757 - Dec 11th, 2016, 8:20am
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 10:07pm:
Now, the spirits should be doing what Fernando has said all along - study what is out there, find out who they can work with and improve the conditions once trust is established. Except for guard duty here and there and protecting Jeanette, the spirits have not done a damn thing.

Correction, they have done things such as fix power grids and highways. Fernando complained about that so they had to alter the time line to undo it all. They offered protection for others. Both Fernando and Hondo complained about that and even threatened to leave the party if the Texas Spirits protect anyone else. Don't complain about the Texas Spirits not doing anything when Fernando is the reason they are not doing anything. The Texas Spirits should have left Fernando at home so they can get some work done in peace.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 10:07pm:
Jeanette should at least be an envoy for them and find out that is going on and how the spirits can help. Bur she has not done that either. For her doing that with the hospital would be a good first step.

When Fernando returns, Jeanette should barrow his civil war surgical kit and ask from it what would the docs need. From that since the kit is 90% metal they spirits can make it. The wood parts and case can be made in Japan or Israel and then they get a case or two with 4 of them in it by "air mail."

If the hospitals will not accept anything shipped via the Charlton Railroad, they would not accept this either. No wonder the world is still in the shape that it's in. People don't trust those who can do something about it.
 
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Reply #1758 - Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Dec 11th, 2016, 8:20am:
Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 10:07pm:
Now, the spirits should be doing what Fernando has said all along - study what is out there, find out who they can work with and improve the conditions once trust is established. Except for guard duty here and there and protecting Jeanette, the spirits have not done a damn thing.

Correction, they have done things such as fix power grids and highways. Fernando complained about that so they had to alter the time line to undo it all. They offered protection for others. Both Fernando and Hondo complained about that and even threatened to leave the party if the Texas Spirits protect anyone else. Don't complain about the Texas Spirits not doing anything when Fernando is the reason they are not doing anything. The Texas Spirits should have left Fernando at home so they can get some work done in peace.

Quote from Fernando on Dec 10th, 2016, 10:07pm:
Jeanette should at least be an envoy for them and find out that is going on and how the spirits can help. Bur she has not done that either. For her doing that with the hospital would be a good first step.

When Fernando returns, Jeanette should barrow his civil war surgical kit and ask from it what would the docs need. From that since the kit is 90% metal they spirits can make it. The wood parts and case can be made in Japan or Israel and then they get a case or two with 4 of them in it by "air mail."

If the hospitals will not accept anything shipped via the Charlton Railroad, they would not accept this either. No wonder the world is still in the shape that it's in. People don't trust those who can do something about it.

Jeanette Isabelle

 
I think you got them confused.
 
The spirits, according to you, have not extended their reach a few miles past the Texas border. What power grids that are available outside of that reach are what the people did. Remember we are somewhere in Southern Montana - well outside their reach. In areas with wind turbines, they were put up and repairs, bring back between 40% to 65% of those that fell in the Happening.
 
Military Bases that were resettled were discovered to have their own generators and needed fuel to turn them on. (This is similar to the power back up units in a data warehouse: large diesel engine turning generators day and night. This diesel engine is similar to a ship's diesel engine in size and power.)
 
Many solar panels that powered street lights and so on were taken down and used to build larger solar farms. Existing solar farms were  repaired. And other technologies - Other Spirit Technology or man made, were tested an exploited. Though there is a lot going on it is not that hard to get going one segment at a time. In recreating and repairing an infrastructure is what these settlements have been doing. Electrical, water, food, transportation (vehicles, roads, rail, sea, and air), and communications are the important ones. With Food and water being first, and the rest to follow as needed.
 
The Spirits (Though I personally do not agree with them) done this for the people of Charlton and expanded their help through parts of Texas and even a few miles beyond but they have not extended themselves beyond that, and we are at least 1800 miles from there. In that, there are hundreds of miles of road and rail to fix up and many towns to connect too before the spirits can send a train from Charlton to the town we are in. And they had over 40 years to fix this up and they did nothing. So who's fault is that? Not Fernando's. He was not around when this happened. But he is right in complaining about it, because as he sees it, the spirits are willing to help those who are going to fulfill their goals, what ever those goals maybe, for that is what they have shown themselves out to be.
 
I as a writer and a character have pointed out where the spirits can recycle buses and train cars, but they did little to anything about them. I as a writer and character stated what and how things should be repaired, and yet, they did little with that information. So who's at fault here?
 
Because of the past with these and other spirits, many out there do not want to deal with the spirits because people got burned in their dealings. In Hondo's entry posts - another spirit group took over and corrupted a town. Who's fault is that? Were there Texas Spirits there to help those from the dictatorship of this spirit group? No there wasn't. And they too had a copy of Jeanette's Journal which predicted of Hondo'a arrival and they tried to have him killed. I doubt you noticed that at all. But Hondo's clan promised that they would find every copy of the journal and destroy them. They think they got them all, it is obvious that they did not. Since people got burned by dealing with the spirits, they do not want to deal with the spirits.
 
Again, this is where Jeanette being an envoy would work best for their benefit - both the people and the spirits. She does not have to tell them that she is working for them, all she has to do is say that she is representing a group of investors, medical workers, what ever, from Israel, Japan, what ever and in that representation she has gone from town to town to make deals and arrangements to improve their medical facilities. The only issue is that such supplies will be delivered by sea to Texas and have to be brought up to their towns. Once that is dealt with, then they can reap the rewards. All she needs the towns to do is to sign up for this and create another treaty - this one for the sharing of technology and trade routes for medical reasons. Once she has a book load of towns willing to do the work to get the roads and rail running again, she can show the spirits this and work started to get this done. In a matter of months, the first of the deliveries can be sent to the towns. So what is the delay? Saying that Fernando this and Fernando that is an excuse because it does not fit what the spirits want.
 
Not getting any this done is what Fernando is complaining about. This has always been his complaint. The Spirits concern about Jeanette's Journal is a load of crock and we as writers and characters know this. The Spirits trying to persuade Jeanette into immortality, taking care of Elsa and then Penny, and other things offered to her have been nothing more than traps laid out for her for not doing what has to be done and that's helping others that are out of her way. Everyone that she's help came to her, and most of them in the guise of a spirit. She does not see that she is being manipulated to do as they want her to do. Fernando is here to help out who ever is out there that needs help. He's willing to help Gabrielle because she needs help. He does not care about her being a stupid leader for the spirits because that is what they want her to be. Jeanette is willing to help Gabrielle because the Spirits told her that it has to be done. Guess what, a serpent told Eve to go eat an apple and guess where that landed mankind!
 
I just don't believe that you are actually blind to this insight. This is not about the spirits or helping out 1 very specific person. This is about a journey where many along the way are going to need help in one form or another. This is about the interaction of characters and what they can do for others and for themselves. This is about looking at the landscape and seeing what is wrong and try our best in correcting them. This is about the trip this group is taking and seeing the world for what it is and doing something about it. In all this the spirits can go to hell because they had 40 years to undo this and did nothing and because somebody points it out to their face - Fernando - that they cite him as the cause of the problem? That is the biggest loaded crock of shit I have ever heard.
 
As Fernando says, "No excuses. Lets get this shit done!" For Jeanette that means making deals and signing up hospitals and the towns they are in for supplies they need that can be shipped from Texas which will lead to the rebuilding of roads, rail and airways. That means for her to start with this one hospital Karl is in and deal with it. If she needs to barrow Fernando's civil war surgical field kit, she is welcomed to it if she asks for it first. She can then look it over and see how simple it is; with the exception of a couple of handles, everything but the box is made of metal. The handles on those few items are made of wood though plastic can be used instead.
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Reply #1759 - Dec 11th, 2016, 8:31pm
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
The spirits, according to you, have not extended their reach a few miles past the Texas border.

That is what you wanted. Before the last change in the time line the Texas Spirits were fixing power grids and highways and repairing and extending existing railroads outside of Texas.
 
Therefore, for the Texas Spirits to have the railroad they want without fixing highways and power grids, they would have to go back more than 200 years ago and build a railroad from the ground up.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
Remember we are somewhere in Southern Montana - well outside their reach.

If I know exactly where in Montana we are, I can tell you how close we are to a Charlton rail line. From looking at a map, there are two Charlton rail lines in Montana.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
In that, there are hundreds of miles of road and rail to fix up and many towns to connect too before the spirits can send a train from Charlton to the town we are in.

Since the last change in the time line, the Texas Spirits have the railroad they want and it was repaired after the Happening. If a town does not have a Charlton rail line running through it at this time, it will NOT have one in the future because the railroad was finished a long time ago.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
And they had over 40 years to fix this up and they did nothing.

If this town does have a rail line, the Texas Spirits will not fix it because it is not their rail line.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
So who's fault is that?

It's no ones fault. If a town does not have a Charlton rail line, it's because it was never in the plans.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
I as a writer and a character have pointed out where the spirits can recycle buses and train cars, but they did little to anything about them.

The Texas Spirits designed their own passenger trains and therefore are unable to use other passenger train cars because they would not work with theirs. If the Texas Spirits need busses then the bus graveyards are already empty.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
In Hondo's entry posts - another spirit group took over and corrupted a town. Who's fault is that? Were there Texas Spirits there to help those from the dictatorship of this spirit group?

The Texas Spirits can't be everywhere and they can't know everything that's going on.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
And they too had a copy of Jeanette's Journal which predicted of Hondo'a arrival and they tried to have him killed.

There are two things wrong with this. One, Jeanette's journal was never available to the public. Jeanette's close friends and family got a copy. Mavis got a copy because of her family connections. How Ariel's grandfather got a copy will be investigated. Two, Jeanette was never there. She could not have written about Hondo's arrival in that town. Therefore those Spirits could not have known about Hondo's arrival from Jeanette's journal. The following is Jeanette's journal up to last night's entry. As you can see, there's no information about Hondo's arrival in that town:

SPOILER:
Dear reader: Save for Hikaru Pointer, no one's to reveal this book's existence to Chihiro or Danielle.
Using minimum words to save space. Have one journal and no idea how long this will last.
 
April 30, 2010
Respond to shooting at High Pointe Elementary. Lone gunman apprehended by crows; lone wolf got my attention. Shift ended. Returned. No wolf. Gave statement, drove out of parking lot and saw wolf again. Followed wolf to the old church. Church open. Wolf walked in and stood by large book. Don't know the language. Wolf walked out, stood a few feet from 1382, mimed a wall and disappeared.
At home, Ellie and I heard a crow inside. Crow perched on monitor. Ellie's name appeared. Called her. Explained what happened. Didn't believe me. Asked crow where I'm going. Pacific Northwest. Asked when I'm leaving. April 2010. Asked crow what is it. Japanese Spirit. Believe different groups of spirits exist. Believe grey area between spirits and aliens exist. Why Northwest? Rescue orphans, child prostitutes and mutants. Why me? EMT, who knows Hikaru, is needed. Ellie called Hikaru. Hikaru knew nothing. Walk out front door with three med kits, pulse oximeter and BOB.
 
April 30, 2066
Transported to Pacific Northwest, fifty-six years to the minute. Purse found on ground. Have more medical supplies than Charlton Hospital. One kit for general public. Two for the party and an after-mission job: live-in health care worker at Old School, a home for mutants (like X-men). Home has two campuses: South Campus, formerly High Pointe Elementary. North Campus, formerly West Intermediate School. Both campuses renovated by Texas Spirits. Looks new, really nice. Accepted the job, don't know why.
Saw two young ladies, residents of Old School: Chihiro, a Japanese mouser with feline teeth, has met Muta and Baron Humbert before meeting Japanese Spirits at a bathhouse. Though young, she can think on her feet. Will find Baroness Louise with laptop. Knows System 7. Danielle, blind, has the marksmanship of skilled sighted people. Wears Girl Scout uniform. Both are responsible young ladies.  
Hikaru appeared. Said I never returned. Read copy of journal I'm now writing, published by Alcatraz Press (the only in the former U.S. territory Hikaru believes to exist). People, who read said journal, prepared for apocalypse. Hikaru's copy of journal said to be very dangerous. Events that happened so far are in her copy.
Fernando, from Kevin and Kell and The Acorn Café, appeared. His selection, by Texas Spirits, is a mystery.
People hold Spirits in high regard. In Charlton, largest walled settlement Hikaru knows of (1382 to the south and west, 180 to the north and Hampton to the east), people say Spirits carry lost items, things people forgot about. Renmei teaches that Spirits move freely between this life and the next. Charlton Library has a 2006 copy of Whisper of the Heart, stamped and signed by author.
In 2011 Japan experienced an earthquake and tsunami. Before being hit, three nuclear reactors shut down and disappeared. Apocalypse ended forty years ago. People have been rebuilding since with places progressing faster than others. Texas, only former U.S. state doing well, will be a republic. Groups need to hammer things out. Will have two forms of currency: gold and silver coins is one. Though smaller, there are settlements doing well. Arik died three years ago in Charlton Hospital. Experienced chest pain, died next day. Named in Ellie's will: my old bedroom and everything in it. Sharpening system still in room, parts worn out with age replaced.
Have four nephews. They have families of their own.
Spending night in Salish village. Our lodging and transportation, two V.W. Campers, arrived.
Hikaru said I became an EMT because, though I like it, there's more to life than singing and voice acting. Became EMT. That isn't it. Fernando returned to Camper with box. Hikaru said clothing for rescued children are in box.
Will get clothes and supplies tomorrow at Dr. Brown's Shoes in nearby settlement. Dr. Brown is said to resemble Dr. Emmett Brown.
 
May 1, 2066
Hikaru compares published journal with original. Select Alvin and the Chipmunks: The Squeakquel on iPod. Closed my eyes to hold back tears. If I return, time loop breaks creating problem. Believing Princess Elsa of Arendelle (frightened, emotionally traumatized snow queen who nearly killed her sister Anna) can fix problem, Texas Spirits alter history for first time: forge alliance with Arendelle: Texas Spirits' cloaked ships defended Arendelle, Elsa adopted. Moro (a wolf Spirit) worked with her at Old School. Gloves help.
Chihiro received purple hair tie (cotton soft; sparkles like gems) when she worked at bathhouse.
Hikaru checks paperwork in Campers. Fernando questions need for them, shoots messenger and drives to Dr. Brown's Shoes. Moro appears with Elsa. Moro disappears and is seen again at Dr. Brown's Shoes. Dr. Brown looks like Emmett Brown. Disappeared to modern examination room, try on pair of tinted prescription safety goggles. Their computer has same alphabet as book in the old church. Spirits have a sign and written language; no spoken language. Chihiro, Danielle, Gabrielle and I receive a cedar case with nameplate. Mine has pioneer dresses, white aprons, pairs of white cotton gloves, handkerchiefs, EMT shirts, EMT pants, black belt, small black purse, red hooded EMT cape, a pair of black leather gloves and laundry bag. Gabrielle's case has dresses with wing slits and a wing brush. Hospitals will sterilize CPR masks and replace parts. Dr. Brown plays "Country Roads" on violin. Chihiro has nice vocals, hasn't sung in nearly two years; used lyrics written by Shizuku Tsukishima. Hikaru has known about Chihiro since before reading this journal. Time on pulse oximeter is exactly two hours off.
There are $1,000, $500, $250 and $100 gold coins. Hotel industry manipulates silver, gets customers using gold. Actual value: $10. Artificial value: $133. Somme people will not accept silver at artificial value. Old U.S. coins: a form of currency in Texas. Exchange rate: $100 gold coin for $100 in old U.S. coins. No exchange rate for silver. South Campus looks like snowflake-themed castle with two flags: second is the Arendelle flag. DART Blue Line goes to San Antonio. Huston Metro Red Line/DART Green Line goes to Oklahoma City. Renewable energy used as much as possible; new power plants built. People look beyond having Texas settlements unify. Texas is Step 1. Charlton walls will remain. Amateur radio operators and weather hobbyists run Texas radio stations. Hikaru's interested in my great nephew, Theodore Bagdasarian. He's involved theater and radio broadcasting. Became an Immortal at Age 9.
I prefer receiving help to getting destroyed. Yet I'm the enemy? Fernando reveals true self, says things humans should not say and calls for his daughters. I see how he treats them. History altered: Princess Anna of Arendelle is here. Scared, Elsa begs Anna to stay away. Temperatures drop, clouds gather and the wind blows. Anna accidently removes a glove. Ice shoots from Elsa's ungloved hand. Elsa runs off. With glove, Moro goes after Elsa. Man cries "Mutant!" Elsa begs him to stay away. Ice shoots from ungloved hand and hits ground. Ice forms under her feet. Elsa runs, leaving trail of ice. Snow falls. Macey (Fernando's adopted daughter) gets cedar chest with clothes, laundry bag and lice shampoo. Anna gets winter outfit at Dr. Brown's Shoes. Chihiro gets wool coat. Moro has two maps: gives one to Fernando, the other to me. Moro joins us in Camper 1.
Danielle gets trench coat. Hikaru still freezes.
Elsa is scared. Snow falls in hotel dining room as she eats; Fernando accuses her of playing in snow. Moro tells Elsa to get her suitcase. Elsa wants to go home, not Arendelle. Fernando says no mutant is safe, most use powers for selfish deeds. Elsa hides behind and clings to Moro. Moro doubts time line Fernando spoke of exists. Fernando draws gun, "Take this word with you to hell, Moro. 'M.A.R.K.' It stand for Murder, Arson, Rape and Kidnapping - the four crimes anyone can use deadly force against the perpetrator doing it order to stop it. In possession of the child Elsa, you kidnapped the child. Before I send you off to meet our Lord and Creator for him to choose your fate, you got one chance to redeem yourself and do what is . . . right, Moro! There will be no more after this! So choose your actions wisely, Moro! Because if you don't, your life ends here right now!" Danielle aims gun at Fernando. Moro tells Danielle to holster weapon. Danielle obeys. Cops save and arrest Moro; take advantage of Fernando: $5,000 for batteries, five silver coins for groceries. To bring Elsa to Moro without her mutation known, Hikaru buys new quilt for $100. Hikaru buys two cases of soda with silver coin. Fernando gives bag of sandwiches to me. I offer him and Macey sodas.
Texas Spirits know where Shizuku Tsukishima is.
Fernando: Council of Five wants us to evolve and be one with God. Hondo and Valentine here with camper (sleeps six, has kitchen and bathroom), truck and Bronco (each sleeps two), year's food for a tribe, camping gear, heaters, composting commode, guns and ammo to fight civil war twice. Hondo and Valentine are camping. Three times I said stay together. Fernando goes to hotel.
 
May 2, 2066
Hikaru has eBooks on Arendelle and Charlton (a city state since before Columbus). Charlton never lost a war. In 1803 Charlton forges alliance with Arendelle. Details are sealed. Every army against Arendelle suddenly destroyed. Every enemy warship docked at an Arendelle port and every enemy warplane landed at an Arendelle airport without firing. Enemy crew destroyed own warship. Then on, every warship and warplane arrived in Arendelle without crew. Arendelle suffered no known deaths from attacks against them. Elsa unmentioned after 1803. Texas is a republic as of January.
Charlton makes oxygen systems and pulse oximeter sensors.
Seasonably dressed, Hikaru made breakfast. Didn't hear from Fernando or Macey. Elsa wears coat for appearances. Moro asks Chihiro if she's comfortable in church. Service starts with U.S. national anthem. Hondo bought two insulated Dub Box popup trailers with heater, toilet, outdoor shower and kitchen. Texas Spirits got and fixed a bus in Kansas. Kill two birds with one stone if party can use it. Roads are drivable? Better to drive bus than teleport it. Hondo spots obvious problem: Elsa in tornado alley.
Tomorrow is last day of market. Traveling with merchants, we're heading south. Some merchants will enter first town, not mutant friendly. Others will go to second town, mutant friendly.
In Japan, Chihiro helped Humbert search for Louise. In Charlton, she cleans temple after school.
Gabrielle will be kicked out of home because of black angel wings. That's Fernando's reason (my first of two) for being here. Even in mutant-friendly places mutants with black angel wings are shunned. Gabrielle is to fix that. I care enough for Elsa I accepted immortality and returned home. Being here, second reason I'm here, fixes problem my absence creates. Does Elsa return to her home or stay? Texas Spirits need Fernando and Hondo to find a way to allow both. There's another person (neither royalty nor a snow queen) I'd accept immortality for. Fernando, an Immortal with immortality pills, lectures me on immortality?
 
May 3, 2066
Crow sounds alarm in bar last night. Moro confirmed something's wrong. Hondo checks, sees nothing. I remain. Fernando and Hondo use back door. Slavers are killed.
Four victims, young ladies, join party, no home to return to. Slavers' box truck converted to RV for them.
Go to market to prepare meals (sandwiches) on the go with caravan.
A house divided cannot stand; can't get out because of time loop. Does time loop go beyond mission? I accepted immortality and adopted Elsa because she can't return to her time.
Need to rest for long drive tonight.
 
May 4, 2066
The ladies who joined party: Ruth, Ester (Ruth's sister), Joanna (Ruth and Ester's cousin on father's side) and Susanna (Joanna's sister). Fernando and Hondo rescue Howard and Earl (sons of Ruth and Ester's eldest cousin on mom's side) from wreck.
Wilbur Robinson sells me a nine-year-old Immortal and her stuff: Portable Singer sewing machine, sewing kit, schoolbooks and an iron. Penelope, Penny for short, talks to Spirits and looks like Vanellope with short hair. She made all her clothes, except socks and shoes, and her plush crow Oliver. To help Robinsons, party buys hitch and Dub Box for their transportation. Not having bonded with Elsa, Texas Spirits raised a child I'd be interested in, made her an Immortal and staged a sale so I'd buy her.
Fernando and Moro differ on time loop. Fernando never met these time travelers in his travels.
Macey sprained her ankle. No broken bones found.
Karl (goat-like features) played Tonya (young woman, red fur, pink hair and fox-like features) and Zoey (girl, blue hair and cat-like features), threatens party and is introduced to Lucy. Karl played and tried to break up Ruth's family. Angry and uniformed, Ruth threatens to bring slavers here. Because of threat, Fernando's girls scare Ruth and Joanna with rape. Fernando has conference with them. Things have been or will be straightened out. Fernando and Hondo are teaching a gun class.
 
May 5, 2066
Elsa got help from doctor and is in control of her power.
Dressed for tonight's victory party. Slavers surrendered. Moro gave Hikaru a reproduction of the princess dress she wore in fourth grade play. Though the play of twin princesses she did with Tsubasa is a precious memory (written for them by a classmate before he died), the play almost didn't happen. Hikaru almost lost Tsubasa. During the play Hikaru was sobbing on stage. Audience applauded Hikaru's "convincing performance." Moro gave Hikaru a replacement outfit.
I signed Penny's adoption papers during Tanya's birthday party. Penny and I will live in Dub Box the party bought for the 73 Beetle.
Elsa and Princess Rapunzel of Corona (missing since infancy as of 1803) are cousins. Texas Spirits found Rapunzel.
Bat arrives from Charlton and transforms: eighteen-year-old female, black hair, light skin, wearing black dress, black fingernail polish and dark makeup. She owns copy of journal. When Mavis was a baby, Spirit haters murdered her mom. Mavis and her dad move to Charlton. He owns/runs a luxury hotel. On her eighteenth birthday she and her dad sang in the hotel's nightclub with his old band mates, his first time since wife died. The nocturnal Spirit joins party.
Texas Spirits designed ZPM powered, standard gauge, articulated train with Lantean safety/security features.
Texas Spirits can undo puberty. "Immortal Jeanette" appears eleven.

 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
Again, this is where Jeanette being an envoy would work best for their benefit - both the people and the spirits. She does not have to tell them that she is working for them, all she has to do is say that she is representing a group of investors, medical workers, what ever, from Israel, Japan, what ever and in that representation she has gone from town to town to make deals and arrangements to improve their medical facilities. The only issue is that such supplies will be delivered by sea to Texas and have to be brought up to their towns. Once that is dealt with, then they can reap the rewards. All she needs the towns to do is to sign up for this and create another treaty - this one for the sharing of technology and trade routes for medical reasons. Once she has a book load of towns willing to do the work to get the roads and rail running again, she can show the spirits this and work started to get this done. In a matter of months, the first of the deliveries can be sent to the towns. So what is the delay? Saying that Fernando this and Fernando that is an excuse because it does not fit what the spirits want.

I need to get back to you on this one.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
Not getting any this done is what Fernando is complaining about. This has always been his complaint.

Except for Jeanette being an envoy, which I will get to in a later post, what you brought up in this post has been addressed.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
The Spirits concern about Jeanette's Journal is a load of crock and we as writers and characters know this.

How is this a load? They need the journal.
 
Quote from Fernando on Dec 11th, 2016, 12:46pm:
In all this the spirits can go to hell because they had 40 years to undo this and did nothing and because somebody points it out to their face - Fernando - that they cite him as the cause of the problem? That is the biggest loaded crock of shit I have ever heard.

What do you want them to do in a period of forty years? I told you what they have done. Correction, I have not told you everything. I explained why they had to undo things and why they have to back off.  
 
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