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After Chaos (Read 186860 times)
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Re: After Chaos
Reply #1490 - Sep 5th, 2016, 12:36pm
 
Quote from Fernando on Sep 4th, 2016, 2:03pm:
"Hikaru's marriage to Arik while maintaining a young teen's appearance"

Hikaru was originally an artificial life form and Jeanette's character in The Acorn Cafe. I fell in love with this adventurous computer geek so Jeanette let me have her. I wrote Arik getting married to Hikaru in Japan, the only nation that recognized a marriage between an organic life form and an artificial life form.
 
When "After Chaos" was in The Acorn Cafe I wanted to play Arik and Hikaru but artificial life forms were not allowed in this setting. I worked with The Nobody to figure out a way to allow Hikaru in "After Chaos." In "After Chaos" Hikaru went form being an artificial life form to being a mutant. She was an Immortal and a human computer as defined by The Computer Wore Tennis Shoes, both the original version and the made for TV remake.
 
After Hikaru's profile was created, The Nobody said "Nobody's perfect." At that time I did not know what he meant.
 
In The Acorn Cafe "The Setting and Rules" was not organized like it is here so I thought it was the year 2050. In 2050 Arik would be old but still able to get around. With Arik still around there was a lot of good chemistry between him and Hikaru. Also Hikaru's human computer mutation provided a lot of good material. Out of necessity the computer engineer became a bit of a steam punk engineer. She even engineered a few Mad Max surprises for Arik's Crown Vic.
 
Later on I figured out what The Nobody meant when he said "Nobody's perfect." After a person becomes an Immortal, they cannot gain any more mutations. Because of that Hikaru is not a human computer this time so she's just a computer engineer who became an Immortal when she was thirteen.
 
I would be fine if I never had sex. Hikaru is a mentally and emotionally mature woman so I thought she would want to have sex.
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Reply #1491 - Sep 8th, 2016, 9:03pm
 
Note: There is another post I need to do before morning; I'm a bit limited on what I can put in it unless I hear from you.
 
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Reply #1492 - Sep 9th, 2016, 9:28pm
 
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This is the Cabin, not the Cafe. I know HIkaru's full history from the cafe, and it does not apply tot his RPG as Jeanette stated. Hikaru is human and immortal, not an artificial construct of a being known as a "Persocom."
 
As a human, immortal or not, she can be killed with enough force applied to her body She can be injured with enough force applied to her body. She is not super strong, or capable of wielding extra power outside of a normal physical human. She can not transform or access computers from extra ports built into her body. She is a typical human being outside of being an immortal and living life all these years.
 
One of the Issues Hondo and I are having is sex and age (and apparent age). So let me lay down the law as it is:
Any form of art, literature, music, etc., depicting sexual activity of any form with an adult and a minor is child pornography. It is also part of the TOS of this forum (and if it is not, I will add it sometime next week). Since it is deemed as child pornography even though the participants are over the age of consent (18 in most areas in the USA), if they are viewed as below the age of consent, then there are consequences to face.
 
This is where the line is drawn. Jeanette has been skirting the issue of age and carnal knowledge through most of the the RPG. Much of it has been ignored up to this point. Now she wants to be 11 years old, but yet retain her sexual knowledge and experience (or lack thereof) - despite her being over 80 years old but appearing to be 11 with carnal knowledge, that is child porn in a literally construct.
 
This we have been trying to point out in one way or another. Since those ways are not working, then I'm laying it down thick - IT IS NOT ALLOWED ON THIS RPG OR FORUM.
 
There are also issues with Penny wanting to be sexually knowledged at the age of 9 as well. No 9 year is wondering about how things work and how things fit down there unless she is sexually experienced. All they know is what they got, and that is it. If somebody explains to them about the "Birds and the Bees" that does not make them want to experience it. It only makes them know how things should work.
 
Lastly on Penny again, there is no way for her or anyone else, not even the Spirits themselves, to know that she is an immortal at the age of 9. She would have to undergone a several years with no physical change to realize that she is an immortal and that her abilities kicked when she was 9 ears old years ago. The only exception to this rule is Vampires when they sire a victim to be a vampire with them, only then can one say that they are immortal. Now are you saying that the Spirits are Vampires and have sired Penny to be an immortal with them?
 
The only other way for find out that Penny is immortal is to "Kill" her and she does not die from the experience but she needs to heal from her wounds. What to put Penny through that? I don't.
 
For now I'll go along that Penny is immortal at the age she seemingly is at 9, but she needs to be older chronologically than what is stated, as proof of her immortality.
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Re: After Chaos
Reply #1493 - Sep 9th, 2016, 9:37pm
 
Quote from Jeanette on Sep 4th, 2016, 8:51pm:
Where is everyone standing regarding the idea of doing away with the time loop? If the time loop is done away with, it would not need to be fixed, Jeanette would not need immortality and the Texas Spirits would not be offering her an incentive to accept immortality.

The only way I know of to do away with the time loop is for the Texas Spirits to undo what they did do. That would have to be done at the end of the RPG because it would end the game because the apocalyptic world as the characters know it would be gone. If the apocalyptic world were gone then would people cease to exist? Correct me if I am wrong on that. For that reason the Texas Spirits would wait. As I mentioned early in this conversation it was after the last change in the time line that the Texas Spirits understood what happened.

Do you want me to tell you now what the Texas Spirits actually did or do you want to figure it out?

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Leave the Time line as it is. We as a group of writer have worked so hard to get to this point should be left alone. Restarting the Time Line into a Loop undoes all of what we did to thie point. We should continue as is without Time Manipulation Interference from the Spirits because they do not like the results.  They do not know where Time is going, so they should leave it be and see where it does go.
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Reply #1494 - Sep 10th, 2016, 10:02am
 
What we discussed in E-mail is different. Here in the Cabin, in the form of notes and story, Penny has been interested in human anatomy. That's it. I was ten when I became interested in and learned human anatomy. Penny will be ten within a month. If ten is normal then a few month difference is within the realm of normal.  
 
Nevertheless, knowledge on human anatomy is carnal knowledge and your argument on carnal knowledge applies.
 
More than once in the story Fernando has said to Moro that the Texas Spirits need to undo what they did. That's exactly what I am proposing. I have said this many times. This time I will be more specific. With the exception of two times, the Texas Spirits made a change because you/Fernando have complained about something. It's NOT about the Texas Spirits likening the results or not (though they will kill two birds with one stone if the opportunity presents its self), it's about the complaints. The first exception is Jeanette saying something about how Penny was raised. The second exception has nothing to do with either of our player characters. The second exception was unplanned. The Texas Spirits traveled back in time to investigate. In the process they learned the location of the missing princess, Elsa's cousin, and returned her to the king and queen.
 
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Reply #1495 - Sep 10th, 2016, 4:53pm
 
After Mavis packs her suitcase (including a wide-brimmed hat, sunglasses, sunscreen and money), she is transported back to camp. Mavis looks up at the clear night sky, sets her suitcase by the gas Camper as to not disturb the occupants and transforms into a bat. She flies above the camp and looks below her. She has a good vantage point to spot any activity in the camp. From here she can also see the festivities still going on though from a distance.
 
 
In the middle of the night the temperature in the gas Camper begins to go down. Elsa is moving in her sleep as her facial expressions change. She suddenly sits up. "Momma! Papa!"
 
Moro, who is sharing the bed with Elsa, awakes and sits up.
 
Elsa throws her arms around and embraces Moro. "Spirit."
 
Moro points to the side door and whispers. "Let's step outside."
 
Moro touches the door and as quietly as it can, it opens. Moro steps outside. After Elsa stepped outside Moro places her hand on the door again until the door's mechanisms had closed the door tightly.
 
Mavis spots the activity, flies down and transforms into her human form but maintains a privacy distance as Moro is handling this.
 
Elsa begins without first naming what she experienced, a bad dream. "I was asleep in my room in the castle when a crow in the window woke me up. I sat up and saw that woman with the long black hair and red dress. She was in my room. She was wearing a hooded cape and holding a baby in her arms. Guards came in my room as the woman escaped out the window. Before she came into my room, she was in another part of the castle."
 
It stands to reason that the woman came in Elsa's room a different way than how she left. By default she would be in another part of the castle. Elsa does not know how she knows this; she knows that the woman was in the castle for another reason.
 
Moro throws her arms around Elsa.
 
Note: I'll stop here in case anyone wants to add something.
 
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Re: After Chaos
Reply #1496 - Sep 11th, 2016, 9:22pm
 
I need to put the RPG on hold for two weeks because Hondo and I need to take care of family and personal business during this time.
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Reply #1497 - Sep 26th, 2016, 7:39pm
 
Where are we regarding the two-week hiatus?
 
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Reply #1498 - Sep 26th, 2016, 8:05pm
 
No word on Hondo yet but if he is on schedule, he should be back within 24 - 48 hours. I'm also done with what I have to do.
 
You can make a post that cleans up a few things or ties up loose ends, as long as it does not cross into the next morning.
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Reply #1499 - Sep 27th, 2016, 8:14am
 
I stopped where I did with Elsa's scary dream in case anyone wants to contribute. If not, Moro will be looking into this in the morning. Almost everything Elsa said fits what Moro knows about the incident Elsa dreamed about. The exception being there is nothing in the report saying that Gothel left the castle with a baby.
 
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