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After Chaos (Read 187665 times)
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Re: After Chaos
Reply #1170 - May 24th, 2016, 10:55pm
 
"I'm going to throw the items I question until you figure it out since you will not listen to what I have to say as fact or realization. So hear me out. That journal is no bigger than a 300 page novel - give it that much.  If you wrote 1/2 a page a day, you would have about 2 years of writing in it. Correct? But 'they', who ever they are..., claim that the last entry in it is 2122, some 60 something years. Care to do the math: 1/2 a page a day for ever day, for 60 plus years would make about 43,800 pages. Placed on the floor it would make a book about 44 inches or a bit less than 4ft tall and weight about 100 plus pounds of paper. Now you need to think - that journal you had in your hands that big? Hell No!" Fernando tells her.
 
He continues, "So what is that journal representing? Who's words are they representing if it is not yours? Where is the original material that Journal came from? There is so much you have to figure out on your own, it and not read from the book. Not even Hikaru know even though she read the journal. That material is heavily edited, even if it is your words, somebody went in and took what they want others - and you - to know. That is why I say do not read it! It is not complete, it is not from your pen as somebody carved what they want from what you say you did. Get where I am coming from?"
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Reply #1171 - May 24th, 2016, 11:29pm
 
"Maybe what Hikaru has is the first volume. You and I don't know what was published. Oh, you mean what I have in my case at this time. Has it occurred that other journals will be supplied?
 
"Nobody, except for those who compared a copy with the original, can claim it was edited."
 
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Reply #1172 - May 25th, 2016, 1:30am
 
"OK. Since you are so willing to side with the spirits, and they will never be happy with the results you bring them, you are doomed to stuck here in this time loop for the rest of infinity. Now if you do not mind, I have a daughter to take care of." Fernando tells her.
 
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Reply #1173 - May 25th, 2016, 8:04am
 
"I'm following what seems the most logical to me. Unless someone compares a copy with the original, they would not know if the journal is character for character the same or edited."
 
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Reply #1174 - May 25th, 2016, 11:25am
 
"This mission is supposed to last some 6 weeks to 3 months or so; yet that journal has 2 years of entries in it. And that seems logical to you? Your logic is flawed in that way of thinking. Before printing, all books are edited fro their original content. Nothing's verbatim. In that I know they are not the same. And the journal you write into is some 50 - 100 pages. How does 50 pages become 300 pages? And who's doing the editing when they get your journals, now that you know you will own more than one. Then again, how did they get those journals to begin with? And who are they to publish it? Was it done with your permission? You do not know because that information is not in the journal. So screw the logical thing and how about doing the right thing, which is helping out others in their time of need while we go look for Gabrielle and it is time to save her as well. I'm expecting nothing more from you other than that. And like I said, I need some private time with this little one and have a personal and private talk about where she was and why she was there when she got hurt." Fernando tells her.
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Reply #1175 - May 25th, 2016, 7:59pm
 
"It is logical because I'm looking at a bigger picture. You keep saying I need to do what is right for me. Doing what I believe is logical is what's right for me." Jeanette leaves.
 
In Hondo and Valentine's camper, Moro is boiling the potatoes she had cleaned and cut into pieces.
 
Jeanette steps in the camper. "Moro, I have a couple of questions."
 
"What is it?" Moro asks.
 
"Did the Texas Spirits reactivate the time loop?"
 
"No."
 
"Fernando said you reactivated the time loop because you were not happy with my results."
 
"That's not true. During the time you were here, you did a good job."
 
"Was my journal edited?"
 
"The only change made was adding a blank line between the date of the journal entry and the body of the journal entry. That and we indicated when a new paragraph began. Everything else we left alone even the capitalization error you made in your first entry."
 
Jeanette had spelled X-Men "X-men" when she wrote the April 30, 2066 entry. As Moro said, that was not corrected when the journal was published. The May 1, 2066 entry looks rushed; no changes were made to it either.
 
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Reply #1176 - May 25th, 2016, 8:19pm
 
Valentine:  Let's get some things set for you two in the camper. I think I can rearrange some stuff and get you each a place to store your clothes.  Maybe the closet in the living room.
 
Tonya: What about Karl?
 
Hondo: Val, would you take Zoey and start on that. I need to talk to Tonya for a bit. Ill explain later.  
 
Valentine:  OK. Come on, Zoey. Lets get you new clothes put away.
 
Hondo waited until they were gone.
 
Hondo: We need to talk about Karl
 
Tonya: What's wrong?
 
Hondo: This is not easy to say and you're not going to like what I have to say.
 
Tonya: Karl's dying!?
 
Hondo: If he dies here soon it might be cause I killed him.
 
Tonya: What! Why?!? He's out friend he.  . .
 
Hondo: He saved himself but needed you two to help him. Before I got there what was happening.
 
Tonya: He wanted us to go get help at town. I told him not without Zoey. That's when you showed up.
 
Hondo: Had I not he'd probably have left Zoey and she would be dead.
 
Tonya: He'd  never do. . .
 
Hondo: Yes he would! Please, trust me! I just had a talk with him before I went into the camper. He wants to go to the farm he inherited part of and run it.
 
Tonya: I know. We were all going. .  
 
Hondo: He has no plans on taking you two with.
 
Tonya: What! Is this because of Ruth and her family??
 
Hondo: Nope. He plans to force them to split up too. He wants Ruth and Ruth only. He says his uncle is a some sort of dog Wesen and  .  . .
 
Tonya: Oh. . . He never said.  . . But he.  . . We. .  . I thought... Not even little Zoey?
 
Hondo: No. Sorry. I didn't want to be the one who told you but he planned to let you follow him to Texas then dump you there, as long as you we're useful to him. He thinks you two will cement a place for him here.
 
Tonya: But.  . .
 
Hondo: No buts about it! Karl is a piece of shit player.
 
Karl: Did I hear my name?  
 
Karl walked up on them smiling innocently.  
 
Tonya: Your Zoey and my friend, aren't you.
 
Karl: How could you ask such a question? Didn't I go back for Zoey.
 
Tonya: You wanted to go to town.
 
Karl: For help.  I didn't want to see you hurt.
 
Tonya: You haven't answered my question. Are we friends.
 
Karl: Is the Space Pope Reptilian?  Come on now you know me
 
Tonya:  I'm not so sure anymore. Now answer my question straight. Are we friends and are we all going to live on your farm or will your uncle object to a fachsbau?
 
The smile left Karl's face.
 
Karl: So you told her. That wasn't cool, man. You will regret that. All of you will.
 
Hondo stood up.
 
Hondo: Did you just threaten my family?
 
Karl: WHAT family?
 
Hondo: These people, are not just travel partners,nor meet friends. Most of them I consider family and you just threatened mine. I think you should leave.
 
Tonya: You. . You lied you didn't care about us? Not even a little?
 
Karl: Sorry,  baby girl. It's eat or be eaten out there. No one stood by my family. No one protected me. I have to look out for number one. When you aren't helpful anymore then you aren't helping number one so you have to be cut loose.  
 
Hondo: I'll get your stuff. You're leaving camp. Wait by the  front of my truck. NOW!
 
Karl: It's cool. I don't need you folks anyway. You all are headed for death anyway.
 
Karl walked off and Tonya started sobbing. Hondo wrapped his arms around her and she grabbed his tightly and sobbed into his chest.  He helped her back to the camper.  
 
Valentine: What's wrong?
 
Hondo spoke low to keep Zoey from hearing: Karl played them.
 
Valentine: Understand. Come on, Tonya.  
 
Hondo helped Tonya into the camper where she and Valentine went to the bed where Tonya cried onto her shoulder for a bit. The day wasn't  over and the poor thing had been through a week of hell and it just wasn't ending for her.
 
Hondo grabbed Karl's stuff and went outside. He couldn't see Karl anywhere. He shrugged and about went back into the camper when he saw Ruth marching his way with an angry look and Joanna running behind trying to stop her.
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Well the cowboy, like the red man, you had to leave your land
You can't raise your stock and plant your crop in the gumbo and the sand
Greed disguised as progress has put us to the test
They won't be glad until we're gone from our home out in the west
It's sad to see those good old days replaced with greed and doubt
Soon we'll leave the country, the campfire has gone out
Bid 'em all adieu, you can't turn the world about
The cowboy left the country, the campfire has gone out
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Reply #1177 - May 25th, 2016, 10:03pm
 
Hearing the commotion outside, Fernando turns to Macey, "You do not leave from here." before stepping out of the camper.
 
Looking out he can see somebody leave the camp area, Karl from the looks of it. Stepping out into the clearing in front of the campers, he sees Hondo stepping out of his camper.
 
"What happened?" Fernando asks while looking in the direction Karl left in.
 
"Where did he go?" Hondo asks.
 
"First, what happened?" Fernando asks.
 
"That Karl, not only has he played Tonya and Zoey, but he also threatened us." Hondo tells him.
 
"How did he threatened us?" Fernando asks.
 
Hondo sighs, "He said 'You will regret it You all will.' Then he said that we are 'headed for death...'"
 
"I Hate doing this, I really do." Fernando says as he lifts up his cane and twists the knob and puts his hand on Hondo's shoulder. In a flash, they were at the entrance of town for the parking area, some 10ft ahead of Karl. Fernando reaches into his jacket and pulls out his Para Arms 1911 and aims it at Karl. Hondo follow suit with his revolver.
 
Blinded by the light, Karl shields his eyes for a moment before Fernando and Hondo get to his side. He then realizes who were next to him.
 
"I do not know how you got here, but it figures you had to get your friend." Karl taunts at Hondo.
 
Hondo wanted to charge at Karl, but Fernando holds him back. Fernando tells him, "You do not want to meet my friends, you poor excuse of a living being."
 
"Oh like what are you and your friends going to do?" Karl tries tries to man up to Fernando.
 
"I could kick your damn ass and make your sorry tail regret it. But I'll let my friend Lucy do it for me." Fernando tells him. With a stamp of the cane onto the floor, there was another bright light. Fernando and Hondo are up in the branches of a strange looking tree, while Karl is on the ground by its base.
 
"Hey loser! Up Here!" Fernando yells down at him. It is followed by a very loud roar that gets a lot more than Karl's attention, it also gets his fear and adrenaline going. It is Fernando's turn to taunt him as he jumps down to his side and grabs him by the scruff of his neck and puts his gun under his chin, "Shooting you dead here would be the nice thing to do."
 
The loud steps of something coming close gets closer to them and the roar louder.
 
"So, I'm going to regret it? Hondo's going to regret it? No. You are going to regret deal with us, because you are disrespecting our generosity. Let see - according to Japanese Law, since we saved your damn ass, we own it. So we can do what we want with it." Fernando tells him as the thumping of loud footsteps get louder and closer. Fernando shakes Karl by the scruff of his neck to keep him still. "Now listen and listen good, if you want to live, stay very still."
 
The smell of hot humid carrion breathe surrounds them like a sickening fog. Fernando pulls on Karl's neck to make him look up where he sees nothing but teeth as large as his fists and an eye ball as big as his head.
 
"This is Lucy. She's a T-Rex from the Late Cretaceous Time Period some 70million years before you were born." Fernando says as he tries to ignore the smell of shit coming out of Karl's pants. "So, you and what army is going to make me and my family regret any thing?"  
 
Lucy roars at them one more time only to be swatted on the nose by Fernando's cane. "Cut it out, Lucy!"
 
The mighty T-Rex cowards it's head into its tiny arms.
 
"Go, Lucy! Go!" Fernando points his cane away from them. Amazingly the T-Rex looks to where he was pointing before leaving in that direction. He then shakes Karl up, "Stop crying like a #$@!ing baby! Lucy would be nice to you and chomp on you a couple of times before swallowing you whole. The Troodons will treat you like a pack of wolves chasing a wounded buffalo - they will chase you and force you to run until you can not run no more and then rip your body apart without killing you. Now you have some apologizing to do to a lot oe people, and you will remain with us until you get to Texas, for if you disappear for a minute, you end up here without us. Consider yourself lucky if Lucy catches you alone here."
 
Fernando signals Hondo to come down from the tree.. He jumps down from the higher branch to the floor below.
 
"I forget how much lighter gravity is in this time." Hondo says.
 
"That meteor added a lot of mass to the earth when it hit." Fernando says, then pushes a distraught Karl to him, "He will be much more easier to deal with. Make sure he gets a shower."
 
Hondo grabs Karl by the shoulder and lifts him up onto his feet, "Yeah. I'll deal with it"
 
Fernando stomps his cane onto the group after a bright flash of light, they are standing by their camp.
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Reply #1178 - May 25th, 2016, 10:26pm
 
Penny sees Fernando and Hondo leave in a flash of light and return with Karl in a flash of light. She's accustomed to seeing people appear and disappear but not in a flash of light. "There was a flash of light when you left and another flash of light when you returned. What made that happen?"
 
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Reply #1179 - May 25th, 2016, 10:50pm
 
Hondo: Thanks, Jefe. Id rather have shot but.  . .
 
Fernando: It would have just caused issues.
 
Hondo: I'm sure I'll hear about it anyway. When you get time we have some things to talk about.  
 
Fernando: I have just got done with Jeanette. I need to take care of an issue of my own then we can talk.
 
Hondo: Alright.  
 
Hondo turned to Karl. He grabbed Karl's clothes off the Hood of the bronco.
 
Hondo: Use the outside shower and wash yourself. Once you are done you can hand wash those clothes. After which you will report to myself not Fernando for work. You will stay away from all the women folk.
 
Karl murmured: Go #$@! yourself, asshole.
 
Hondo: What was that?!
 
Karl: I said, I'd better go get that shower.
 
Hondo: Then do it.
 
Ruth came marching up to Hondo. Joanna could be heard yelling to her as she tried to catch up.
 
Joanna: Ruth, please. I'm sure he had his reason.
 
Ruth: Hondo! You can't  kick out Karl! I can like who I want and you don't  have a say in it!
 
Hondo: WHAT? You are not makin' any sense.  
 
Ruth: You kicked out Karl from the camp.
 
Hondo: He's staying for now, but he's to stay away from you ladies.
 
Ruth: You are not my father! I can like who I want!
 
Joanna: Please, Ruth. Let him explain!  
 
Hondo: Ruth, he's a player. He played Tonya and Zoey, he's trying now play you, and he threatened all of us when confronted to reveal the truth.
 
Ruth: That's a lie! He told me you are forcing him out as you don't want us together and you lied to Tonya and Zoey to drive a wedge between them so they would need you! I don't  know what kind of sick person gets off having girls worship him like that but it makes me sick! Hurt Karl or try to make him leave and I'll help the slavers find you!
 
Ruth stormed off. Joanna shrugged.
 
Joanna: A woman scorned? Sorry. Is what you say true? Is Karl out to play her?
 
Hondo: Yes. And he wants to drive a wedge between you four and the boys as well.
 
Joanna: After everything...? What a louse!  Don't worry about Ruth. She will settle down.  
 
Hondo: I hope so. Just try to support her carefully.  If I hafta be the bad guy, so be it. Just don't let it come between you two. Fernando and I will take care of Karl. Just try to keep her busy. I know it won't be easy but...
 
Joanna: I'll try. Thanks.
 
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Well the cowboy, like the red man, you had to leave your land
You can't raise your stock and plant your crop in the gumbo and the sand
Greed disguised as progress has put us to the test
They won't be glad until we're gone from our home out in the west
It's sad to see those good old days replaced with greed and doubt
Soon we'll leave the country, the campfire has gone out
Bid 'em all adieu, you can't turn the world about
The cowboy left the country, the campfire has gone out
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